I liked the descriptive words but Stephan was hard to understand with his accent so I'd change that and the end seemed rushed I would rewrite it so that it keeps the same tone as the rest of the story.
It was hard to understand the person
I couldn't understand Cory. But I liked how it was a vampire story. There was also a lot of really good detail.
I couldn't hear Stephan, and the description was kind of weak.
It was hard to understand Stephan but the rest was good
I like the creepiness of this story and how there is no happy ending. Spooky🎃🎃👻👻
I liked the story but, the man was very difficult to understand. Maybe speak clearer. I loved the plot line!!! Was it a original story?
I love the old radio shoes and War of the Worlds broadcast by Mercury Theater. Everyone did a great job. Orson would be proud but may have focused some of the accents! ;-)
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